Sorry I've not posted in a while (it's a long story) but I'm back now.
Okay, about the feedback on the professional critique, it was alot better then predictided.
(I can't say who did the critique but I will hint at a very successfully publishing company)
Anyway, the general overview of the feedback goes like this:
- "You have some lovely vivid descriptions that brought Trinidad alive and made it very visual for the reader." Direct quote from the feedback.
- Synopsis needs work.
- Use careful editing.
- Think about the shape of the story. And....
- Great opening story (with baby Teddy)!
That's all for now folks, I'll update again next Thursday.
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